One sentence and three words

Hi everyone,
Margie took this great shot at sunrise the other morning - so I am uploading it here so everyone can enjoy one of our views. Funny how the shots made our tiny beach seem big. We have regular help keeping the beach clean from the Cork County Council this year - so it looks grand doesn't it?

Today's short post is my attempt to catch the wisdom given me about writing from one of our shopkeepers. David is also an actor and perhaps playwright - a man with great talents. He and I were discussing a brilliant performance of Cambria -a play written and performed by Donal O'Kelly who also did a workshop, which David attended. Bottom line here is that David was telling me the workshop was brilliant and I asked him what was the best remembered bits? "One sentence and three words", he says, "A story ready to tell can be done in one sentence with three defining words."

So here it goes: Our story is about two women who redefine themselves and their live by moving half way around the world! Partnership, persistence, and playfulness.

Any thoughts?
Alana